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He is a good boy.He is outgoing.He likes doing many things.For example:He likes drawing. His pictures are very beautiful. He likes sports.He joins in school basketball team.He is good at study.He is the first in our class.He often helps me study.I will give him a gift ------- a beautiful schoolbag.Thanks for his help.I hope:we can go to the same jonor school and in the same class.
