小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is Chen Jie.She is a pretty girl.She has long black hair.She has big eyes and small ears. She is about 120cm.She is good at drawing. Her pictures are very beautiful.She is good at learning English.Her English accent is very good.we are good friend.Do you want to make friends with us?