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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(37):英语笔友

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要求：

假定你是李华．希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信．描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：
1．年龄
2．性别
3 ．爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节．以使行文连贯；

3．开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. _____________
___________________________________________________________________________
Best regards
Li Hua

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评语：

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文：

Dear Peter, I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experience in traveling, taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards Li Hua

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