山东临沂市临沭县2012-2013学年高二下学期模拟试卷英语作文

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as can seen from the i was busy prepareing for the exam the day after norrow so that i cann,t be go to dinnr with u so i hope u would ubnderstand me bening u are so nice and kind for me.in the first place,i need to be review notes carefullye and do lots of practice if the time permitted .with the rapid development of science abd technology,i can use an laptop or cellphone to contract me to face to face .wish u have a fine time and i will connection u after i in the test