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with the rapidly growing popularity of the internet surfing in china ,the quality of our lifes is improving for he better .i will uy sth on it from thhe different countries based on a good brand .we come to realise that it is convenient and easy for us to get sth from the internet .besides ,it have improve the quality of our life unconsciously.in that case ,we cann,t touch or do not if the real thing .i suuugest if the product ,s price is not high ,we can buy it from the internet,but the product is too expensive ,we can buy them from physical store .under the discussion,we can keep in the touch wiith dealer if the commodity which is sth wrong with it
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