简单句比重稍微偏高,文中有句子错误;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
ihn that case some of the students lose confident in learning the english.in the whole ,english is the common language that most people in he world to use it.if u want to master it first,u can make a bew discover that only yourself study hard on it ,u will find it is not hard for u to grasp it.a magority of people who learn it by cram which is unwise .u can see some movies and talk more to the foreign people .i agree with those people.what,s more,enjoy the learning process .