邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

句式灵活多变，但文中句子错误偏多了；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

with the development of the intener ,the school safety plays an important role in our lives ,more and more peole ,especially students ,like to ask for trouble althrough theu don,t know they are inbig trouble for the siciety .they are absorbed in the temptation from the outside world .making mistake fiiends and having chatting on the net in the net bar.as a result,not only does it hire some security guards is ok but every studets enhance the safety awareness og the school security does it work which will produce a good and lovely effect on the students aw well as the schhol