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With the increasing unemployed rate among college students,more and more people think that it's not worth going to the college.But some other people against it because nowadays everything is oriented by knowledge and we need to go to college to arm ourselves.I think it's worth going to college and reasons are listed as follows. First,going to the college could enrich our knowledge.Books in library can broaden our mind and make us much muture to make choices and decisions ,Besides,the subjects in college become less but profession,and the study in college could make all we have learned more skillful and pratical,which is benefit for us to seek for a job in society. Second,going to the college could improve our abilitiesand dig our potential.As we all know,college life is not as busy as our senior school for the relative lessons.In fact,that's the major reason why some college students get a good job but some don't.We can improve ourselves to be more self-control in an comfortable environment.If we were always diligent and persisted,not only could we make our subjects much betterbut also could arouse our potential to try our best to be the best.Such abilities are quited needed in kinds of jobs. Third,going to the college could enlarge our friendship,Friends are our sunshine and could help make our life easier more or less when we in adversity.With many social clubs in college,we could both improve our abilities and make more friends.Meanwhile,we could learn how to cooperate with others,and such team spirit is emphasized in companies. All in all,it's worth going to the college and the most importan thing is that we should fit ourselves with knowlede and experience to improve our abilities,If we did like that,we will never be a loser!
