高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中学术词汇使用贫乏，同时拼写错误稍多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

After years of rapid industrial development ,people's living condition has been improved to be well-off .However ,it also brings on severe enviorment pollution. My hometown which used to be attractive city also have not been spared. 10 years ago ,this city were surronding by green mountain ,the water was clear to the bottom of the river.A lot of wild tinny fish flicked hither and thither. A lot of people living in the small house ,road were rarrow , they have to working hard to support thier own family but they feel happy. cuz everyday ,when they wake up, the needn't to worried about the pollution problem, the can breath the clean air freely. Now all that beautiful memory has gone ,you can see the high-rising building factory everywhere.A lot of cars were running on the street .But you can't see the wild fish ,clean river anymore,in stead all rivers become stinky waste water . If we don't pay more attention and solve the problem in time, it would influence our economic and social sustainable development.