小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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jack is my good friend. he is twelve hansome boy, and he likes playing basketball very well. i have known him seven years ago when we were in the same kindergarten. everyday we would go home together and play basketbally together.i have learned a lot from him. i think we will be good friends for a life time.