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As we all know that there are a lot of famous senics in China,but,in my heart I think the most beautiful place is my hometown.Not only becuse that is the place where I was growing up,but also because it is really a very intresting place. First of all,the peoples living there are very friengly.The first time when you came to my hometown,everyone on this town will treat you as a very familiar friend,they will send you a lot of beautiful flowers and welcome you to eat dinner at their home. Secondly,many famous senic spots are located on there.For example,the Great Wall,which is a symbol of the most greatest works created by ancent people.Everyone in China are very pround of it.Of course,there are also other famous spots,like the Palace and the Tiananmen and so on. In a word,my hometown is the most interesting place in my heart.And I believe that if you come to my hometown you wil surely get a good experience.