文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用学术词汇;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
As we all know,Chinese ,being our mother tongue,is playing a significant role in chinese extentive and pround culture.However,there is an increasing number students ignore chinese learning.There are in following reason. First and foremost,with the cooperation of foreign industry,there no doubt that learning a second language well does promote to one's job finding. Besides,more and more students are tending to go aboard for a further study,thus, they have to attach much importance in second language learning. Last but not least,as we can see in our daily life,the using of chinese is so commen that student may think it is easy and boring.Significantly,if this situation continues,it would result in a huge lose of chinese traditional culture. From the point of my view,it is hight time to take some measures to prevent chinese learning from ignorance.Only in this way can we take the chinese learning back.I greatly wish we could take chinese learning seriously.