初中英语命题作文真题演练(56):参观农场

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；把握下长难句在文中的分布；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

today is friday so i will go to see my grandpa and grandma as usual .i want to help my father do a manual work in the garden and tomorrow i would go shopping with my mother.in order to prepare for the chinese exam on sunday .and this evening i will go to the concert with my mum \