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简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
With the appearence and development of Internet,more and more people learn that how to use the computer and surf the web.But this phenomenon bring about a social problem that we can not ignore——computer crime. On the basis of my aquaitance,criminal have many way to carry their point.For example,they will make mendacious web page to cheat people.Many careless person will believe it and then give the personal imformation or credit card password to the criminal.In addition,criminal will steal account number like Facebook or QQ.And pretend the account‘s master tocheat person who on the listing. The criminal’s behaviors bring out many people‘s loss on property and spirit.As a net citizen.If we want to attack and prevent computer crime,we should be careful and possess a pair of eyes that can distinguish between the truth and false.
