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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
From what is apparently revealed in the cartoon above,we can observe distinctly that the sheep stands happily in an optimistic state of mind,ignoring the threat of a dark shade.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating. Concerning the purpose of the person who draws the picture,I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic with respect to the dark shade all day long,he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous however,I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is a half cup of water,the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half while the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously,they have a different perception and feeling toward the same life. There is no denying that,most of the optimists have a high happiness index,which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore,we must read our life with a positive attitude.Moreover,the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly,meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result,an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Consequently,let's keep the famous line of Shelley,the well-known poet,in mind for ever,that is,"if winter comes,can spring be far behind?"
