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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9023
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分54.0分
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作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

I think the most meaningfui life for me is study all the time .As a saying goes "Never too late to learn ".So ,I hope I can study till my life is gone . There are so many good examples of studying all the time .Such as a famous Chinese economist Mr.yu .He learnd how to use computer when he was 81 years old .And at the age of 86,he set up his own website .What is more ,he is going to be a blogger .Actually .he is not only a economist but also a writer .He wrote a lot of essaies and published 75 works . In his daily life ,he spent his time to practice playing computer and writing .He said "I can not celebrite my 100-year birthday ,but I will publish my no.100 book " I konw plenty of people like Mr.yu .They all have meaningful life

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