作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I think the most meaningfui life for me is study all the time .As a saying goes "Never too late to learn ".So ,I hope I can study till my life is gone . There are so many good examples of studying all the time .Such as a famous Chinese economist Mr.yu .He learnd how to use computer when he was 81 years old .And at the age of 86,he set up his own website .What is more ,he is going to be a blogger .Actually .he is not only a economist but also a writer .He wrote a lot of essaies and published 75 works . In his daily life ,he spent his time to practice playing computer and writing .He said "I can not celebrite my 100-year birthday ,but I will publish my no.100 book " I konw plenty of people like Mr.yu .They all have meaningful life