2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(05):户外自动售卖机

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About 35% of the students think that should be set a vending machine while about 65% of the students think that should not be set a vending machine.the reasons are behind this phenomenon are various.first of all ,sale point so much that it is easy for u to choose u favoutite items which is not usual to shop at the shopping mall.there are no lines and save time and money .take up little space .the disadvantage is sales point are much and we can,,t waste the energy make the city beautiful .throwing empty cans are easily to pollute the environment.primary and midle school students will buy the cigaretee which will produce a bad effect on the health.i suggest that we should be encouraged to do part time jobs as they may learn the meaning life and develop their sense of the duty