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从句使用不错，但需加强复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
.physical teacher is extremely strict with us which intend he has little smile in class.when i am in the class i felt remarkably nervous because of can,t answer the matter which he put forward he queston.i am fearful to master it but i urgent to take it it well so i can,t find out ways to come out.
