从句使用不错,但句式变化不明显;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,注意文中少数拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
.physical teacher is extremely strict with us which intend he has little smile in class.when i am in the class i felt remarkably nervous because of can,t answer the matter which he put forward he queston.i am fearful to master it but i urgent to learn it well so i can,t find out ways to come out.