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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；句式变化较为不错，另外需加强句子练习；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
.physical teacher is extremely strict with us which intend he has little smile in class.when i am in the class i felt remarkably nervous because of can,t answer the matter which he put forward he queston .i am fearful to master it but i urgent to learn it well so i can,t find out ways to come out.after all ,the meaning of life and develop their sense of duty .we should have more opportunities to take in well so that i have to make the use of the materials which i can come into contract with the materials
