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As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what is this cause and what are the effects on society.
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With the development of the technology, people are more rely on the Internet than before the time the Internet was not becoming so popular like today. Regardless of young or old, people use internet to find the answer for their problem, and avoid to find friends or families for help.Willing to live in their individual word becomes a society problem, like people do not like to help each other, wanting to fly away from the public, and
