如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇表达不够灵活,但有些单词拼错了;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
As the saying goes ,seeing is truth .nowdays,more and more people believe what he has heard or see.But sometimes it is not competely true . If you make decides after you see,you may only see the surface of the matter. The nature of the things will be covered.sometimes you will misunderstand someone who is important for you. The results is serious . No matter what happens ,we should seek the essence of the matter,only do it by this way,can we reduce mistakes.
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