小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend is jane.she is a good girl.And she is a happy girl.And she is outgoing.And she and I always play football games and video games.Hello, my name is liushu.I am honest.I am saojie. You can also call me lagelanri LI.Thank you very much.Thank you very much.Thank you very much.Thank you very much.Thank you very much.Thank you very much.