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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(69):防止空气污染

发布时间:2015-01-29 14:50浏览次数:674
要求:
写作内容
你们班级举行了一场关于空气污染与人类健康的讨论会。请根据下列提示,写一篇关于如何防止空气污染的文章。
要点提示:
减少工厂污染气体的排放。
植树造林。
采用环保交通方式及利用新能源等。
写作要求
1、注意:要对要点进行适当拓展,比如:解释、说明、补充、举例等,使行文连贯。不能逐字翻译。
2、字数:100左右,开头已给出,不计入字数。

3、参考词汇:排放:give offvt.空气: atmospheren.


As we know, our health is closely connected with the degree of air pollution. Our air has become polluted and it is high time we took action to slow down the air pollution.
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作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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As we know, our health is closely connected with the degree of air pollution. Our air has become polluted and it is high time we took action to slow down the air pollution.Here are some ways for us to prevent the air pollution. First,the government can take some measures,for example they can publish some laws which let factories to give off less dirty air.What's more,it's goes without saying that planting more trees is good for our atmosphere,because plants can absorb carbon dioxide.Since we are students,it is a good idea for us to take public trasportations to go to school.Lat but not least,we can develop new resources,which can cause less air pollution,such as wind resource and sun resource. If we can try our best to carry out these ways,preventing the air pollutions will not be a dream.

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