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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
We often have moving experiences in our daily life. They help us walk along the right road. I still remember that day. I was taking the final exam when I found I didn’t have my eraser with me. I was so worried that I almost cried. Just then, Mike, a boy next to me, understood what was happening. He quickly cut his eraser in half and handed me one part. With tears in my eyes, I finished the exam. I’m deeply moved by what Mike did. He is a real friend. He cares others a lot. I want to learn from him to be the person in need.
