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文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；采用了一些简单的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
in recent years ,disposal bags are widely used have been used in our daily lives thse bags includ waste garbage or old toys which is polluted the air to some extent. in my opinion,it is unwise to make them widely. fiest of all,it resulting in the warming of the earth.at the same time,the ever increased world population contributes to climate change by breating out more and more carbon dioxide and destorying vegetation as well. to solve the problem ,global cooperation is the best way forward.the g should strengthen infomation exchage ,develop environmental management technologies.we indiviuduals casn also make a diffrence by leading a low carbon lifestlyle.only through making joint effects can human beings win the batle to solve climate problems
可可英语 - 划词释义
