题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust To keep trust is necessary to us in our daily lives.I can't image that the world will be something without trusting. To making friend need each ohter to trust. the lover also. If there isn't trusting that we will be full of guessing, argument,burden so on. What's more , we will be betrayed by each ohter. Then, how to keep on maintaining trust in human. First, we should talk each other when we have question. It can avoid question. Second, haearing a bad thing about them who are our friend and lover would trust them rather than to commentary. Thrid, we should think thing with thier view. It can reduce unecessary misunderstand. In a word, trusting is the basis of communicate. we should trust our friend and lover.