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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(69):防止空气污染

发布时间:2015-01-29 14:50浏览次数:677
要求:
写作内容
你们班级举行了一场关于空气污染与人类健康的讨论会。请根据下列提示,写一篇关于如何防止空气污染的文章。
要点提示:
减少工厂污染气体的排放。
植树造林。
采用环保交通方式及利用新能源等。
写作要求
1、注意:要对要点进行适当拓展,比如:解释、说明、补充、举例等,使行文连贯。不能逐字翻译。
2、字数:100左右,开头已给出,不计入字数。

3、参考词汇:排放:give offvt.空气: atmospheren.


As we know, our health is closely connected with the degree of air pollution. Our air has become polluted and it is high time we took action to slow down the air pollution.
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as we know ,our health is closely connect with the degree of air pollution.our health has become polluted and it is high time that we took action to slow down the air pollution. climate change has become one of the most pressing threats for making nowadya .foe one thing,we frequently suffer from the extreme weather such as greater risk of drought in continental areas ,hurricanes that are more intense in soe parts of the world.duo to more fainfall and more intensive winds.also,the earth ingetting wamer and warmer,which leads to more rainfalll and more more intensense winds.also,the earth is getting warmer and warmer ,which leads toi the risk of he sea level. what has caused such global climate changes.to slve the problem,global cooperation is teh best way forward.the goverment should strength infrmation exchanges,develop environments should stremngth information exchanges,develop environmental management technologies ,and formulate internatinal co2 emission standards,we individuals can alsob makea difference by leading a low carbon lifestyle.only through making joint efforts can human beings win the basttle to slve thois it

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