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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Yangshuo is famous for its nature beauty because of its invigorating of its insland and profound tradition culture give u left a deep impression.u can seen everywhere friends from all over the world .many shopkeepers will use english to communicate with foreign fiends.if u want to stay be gee for two days ,before leaving there u should send postcards to u friends
