托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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I am totally convinced that snap judgements can never be trusted. For example, It is very unreasonable to judge a person by his or her appearance.the informations from the first glance is very limited and even partial. It may trick you.Just because a person who dresses decently and talks sincerely does not means his is innocent and kind.You can not judge a book by its cover.Sometimes a person who looks like dangerous might be a very warmhearted and caring person. So the impulsive decision is very not trustworth. In addition,there is anthor example from my personal experience.