拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
To be honest,watching Tv can help us acquire various of information,Comparison with past,it is very convenient.For student like us,we can acquaint the world without going out. Also we can study a great diversity of knowledge. However,it have a negative impact for us if we can not keep a balance between study and watch Tv,Tv will damage our eyesight and influence revision. We must keep a balance between play and study.Everything has two sides,Doctors recommend that we should have a rest every twenty minutes when we watch Tv