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要点：
1. 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象；
2. 用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误；作者词汇积累很好，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；请注意分段。
i recognation you who make me feeling happiness.we exist obstcl ever since .but our harmony alway exist ing.oneday,i am feeling bad .and lie in bed ,unfortunetly my mother doesn't know i was e,however,lihua send me to hosptial and look after me without having a rest ,which make me feeling warth ,finally,i wish you living a happy vacation and all the best
可可英语 - 划词释义
