2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(69):Health

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

The Most Important Thing in My Life The famous actor Angelina Jolie has just announced that she has decided to have invasive surgery, cutting away her breasts. However rich she is, making the decision to have such surgery is still a terrible thing. Jolie’s story let me know that the most important thing in my life is health. I hold the view that if we are physically and mentally healthy, we can do everything we want to . Whatever you do , you cannot achieve your goals unless you are fully vigorous. What’s more , health is the precondition of having a happy life . If you are in bad health , you have no chance to appreciate the beauty of your life. There is an old saying going like that the body is the capital of the revolution. We cannot afford to overlook the significance of health.