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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇基础挺好,能灵活使用部分学术词汇,但词汇拼写要再接再厉;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Should We Save Money? With the development of economy, more and more people can afford expensive goods.But there are still some people such as students who are careful with money in the daily life.Some people contend that all this may not make us smart consumers.From my perspective,admittedly,there is no denying that we can make use of their money as they want, but as a student, we ought to save money as far as possible. The reasons are as follows To begin with, saving money is our traditional virtue which inheritted from generation to generation.Young people play an increasingly important role in the economical development especially the college students. Students should pass on the virtue to the next generation and spread it throughout the whole country.What's more,as a students,thay don't ability of making money on their own.What they spend is their parents' money.Saving money means sharing the burden from parents' shoulders.I believe it is the expression of loving their parents. Last but not at least, I think this behaviour also is a performance of smart consumers. They come up with plenty of methods to save money and maximaze the value of money .As a matter of fact, they areactually the smart consumers. From the reasons above, in my opinion, it is wise of them to save money.We do not have reason to blame those who spend money casually,but we should save money.