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some people think that hiring foreign teachers which is in order to improve the visibility of the school,it means it is no practical significance.while some students think that these teachers can help students execcise their spoken language and improve the interest of learning english.in my opinion,we should need to realize what the aim requires all the students try to develop their capabilities by attending it .in addition,the g should make special policies to encourage them to study well