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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71660
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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My hometown is in south of china.the weather of there is always rainy.People are really good at guiding tourist to visit city which they live .Genarally speaking,taste of people there is hot.So you can taste really smell and hot taste Chinese food there.In my hometown ,there is a famous mountain called "Wugong mountain" which is really popular for tourists and local people . Another point is that local business man are very smart so that almost tourists will spend much more money to get the same stuff.Finally,I hope you have good time to travel in my homework!

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