托福独立写作模拟题:关于金钱

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Fortune accumulating is one of the most talked topic in the contemporary society.Although an increasing number of people have the tendency that making enormorous money marks the feature of one's statue.I personally believe that own the money that makes my life comfortable is satisfied. It's undeniable that money is crucial to one's life.Having a fortune may bring you a beautiful house , an expensive car and even admire from the others.But there is also something we need to persue-the satisfication in spiritual.Many wealthy people from my country are arrogant and abnotious when they go abroad.They believe they are superior to other people because of the fortune they owned.It's not appropriate to judge a person with fortune.Some renowned persons are famous of their contribution to mankind and inspiring struggle to achieve the goals not of thier enormous wealth,such as Steve Jobs. From my perspective,own the money sufficient for living is without doubt a better option. As far as I concern,money is only a media to buy things.Earning enough money to support my family and have some spare money is good for me.The company of a loving wife and an adorable child is more important to me.Instead of induging the circumstance of accumulating enormous money,I prefer to explore the new things from the books and go outside to enjoy the nature.This habbit makes me happy and healthy. Although it's no simple task for us to make a prudent and satisfying choice,I still wholeheartly believe that owning sufficient money is a more suitable option.