2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(73):My Teachers and Me

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I love my teacher,she is a light in my lifetime. Long long ago,when i am seven years old,i become a student of primary school.I meet my teacher first time.She is beautiful，slim,innocent and very helpful.Especially,she has a couple of plump chest.I am shy and timid,i run out my hands to touch her chest,she is really surprise,she shout and hit me.