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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达较为灵活，学术词汇需要加强，单词拼写要认真；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them As we all know,in our lifetime problems are never avoided.So many people often get nervess for these things.However some people just accept these depressing things and see them as a part of their life.Of course,these kind of people live a happier life.So your ability to deal with the problem in your life is very important. Albert Einstein is a well-known scientist.He is the person who invented the lamp.But during these time,he encounted great difficulties.He conducted the experiments for almost 1,000 times and unfortunitely they all failed.But he never thought to give up.Finally,he made it and brought the light to all over the world.Years later,he said the failure experience is very prized for my life.We can see,the Albert Einstein see the problems in his life as gifts. In my opinion,when we meet some troubles in our life,we should face them and try to solve them.We can ask our friends and our families for help.You can also write dairies and think them carefully,too.When you get over them you will find you have take more experiences and you may kown mre about your life.As you increase the ability to deal with the problems in your life,you will feel more enjoy your life.
