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City life or rural life According to a recent poll, with the fast pace of modern life, more and more people like to living in rural. Some people suppose that it is ridiculous. But it is hard to say which is better than the other, because each has it advantage and disadvantage. It is needless to say that living in city has many problem, the air pollution and the traffic jam. But living in the city are convenient and we can enjoy various entertainment. Nevertheless, living in the rural also has it advantage. We can enjoy the pore nature. As for as I am concerned, if a person is generous, when he need other help, other will willing to help him, so such person in spit of living in city or rural also will very enjoying. To sum up, I think it is unimportant where we live, the quality of life are more important.
