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假如你是Jane，你的好友Mary在微博上说最近很累很不开心， 而且很担心即将到来的期末考试，请你在Mary的微博中回复， 给她一些建议，使她振作起来。（注意：文中不能出现姓名和学校等相关信息）
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Dear Mary,i heart about you are not happy recently,and you said you feel tired.We are the same you know,because the damn exam will come soon.we all worry about it.But, i want to give you some advice that maybe reduces your pressure of the exam.First,try to be confident,believe that you work hard that you will succeed,then don't think too much other things or you will be confused by yourself.Second,you shouldn't always study without any play time.You must take some time relax yourself,for example,you can listen to music,go to the cinema in the night,talk to your friend share your feelings and thoughts,because they can help you.I believe you can do well,best wish for you.Yours Jane!
