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City life or rural life According to a recent poll, with the fast pace of modern life, more and more people like to living in rural. Some people suppose that it is ridiculous. But it is hard to say which is better than the other, because each has it advantage and disadvantage. It is needless to say that living in the city has many problem, the air pollution, the traffic jam, housing problem and industrial pollution. But settle in the city are convenient and we can enjoy various entertainment. Nevertheless, living in the rural also have it advantage. We can enjoy the pore nature, and the life in rural are more comfortable. As for as I am concerned, a generous person, if others will willing to helping him when he need others help, so such people regardless of living in the city or rural also very enjoying. To sum up, I think it is unimportant where we live, the quality of life are more important.
