小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend I have a good friend,whose name is Lin Li.I met her when I was 7 years old.She loos quite pretty.She has big eyes ,a small nose and a round face with long black hair.She is cute and nice so that I like playing with her.I share similar values and interests with her.We both love swimming,reading books,playing pingpong and so on.Furthermore,we are both fond of running.Every morning,I run with her on the playground,enjoying the fun of doing exercise.I hope one day,we can be excellent running players.