高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Nowadays,it is common to tour,many people like to go on tour in foreign countries,because they can see to very beautiful view.Nanjing,the administrave city of Jiangsun province,population has five hundred million person.Nanjing citly with 2000 years history and 10 dynasties have this capital. Nanjing citly is very beautiful,beacuse it has many places of interset, such as the xuanwu lake,the jiming temple,the stone citly,there are also much modern factory and high house.