高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；复杂句采用很棒；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Nowadays,it is common to tour,many people like to go on tour in foreign countries,because they can see to very beautiful view.Nanjing is the administrate city of Jiangsun province,population has five hundred million person.Nanjing city with 2000 years history and 10 dynasties have this capital. Nanjing city is very beautiful,because it has many places of interset, such as the Xian lake,the coming temple,the stone city,there are also much modern factory and high house.