2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,there are many interesting place in my country.That are Guilin,Beihai and Nanning. The most beautiful place is Guilin.I would like to take him to see Guilin.To begin with,,Guilin is worthy visiting.And there are a lot of interesting stuffs.The people are friendly and warm.Above all,there is really very pleasant.Confrequantly,my friend will have a good time in my country. In a word,I am look forword to him arrives.