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假如上周末你和班上的同学到方山玩得很快乐。请以My happy weekend 为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
5. 大家都渡过了一个快乐的周末。
4. 不得用真实姓名和学校名称。
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。
I can't wait to tell you the more detail on that day. We get together at eight o'clock on last Sunday morning.We set out after everyone arrived in front of our school gate.I was so excited.It takes about 30 minutes to get to the target place——Fangshan.We started to rode and we talked,laughed and song on the way.When we arrived in Fangshan,everyone become more happy.Some people took photos,some people played game together and some people had picnic.We didn't know what was tiredness and what was annoy,just had a fun.We are all spent a happy weekend.
