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In this world, everyone is going though different things, which is good or bad, failure or successful. But you know, even something we are going through makes us pain and we are getting weak due to them. We should face it with a strong will. Don't lose the strong will no matter whatever we are facing. having a look at those great man. they also had been in trouble. Maybe they were depression and no idea how to go. But they stand up again. They success with a strong will. Maybe every noble work is at first impossible. But they made it. The strong will is assurance of success. only the people who have a strong will can accomplish a great work. We are also .Only we study hard, we can get a better chance to do a great work. So be strong and keep going.
