作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
With the development of science and technology, people can get more and more information and have more and more ways to get information. But can we think it is a good thing? No, I don't think so. Although we can get more and more information, we should kown "A wealth of information creats a poverty of attention". For example, we were so sad for the air crash and hoped that the government could find out the reasons and get result to help their relatives and friends. But a moment later, a great thing came into our sight , and our attention was turned. So to some degree, I don't think it's a good thing that we get more and more information. We can get all kinds of infomation including irrelevant information, too. What should we do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant inforamtion? I think we shouldn't believe some information that doesn't being confirmed. And we should be aware of information. Don't convey wrong information.