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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5753
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

With the development of science and technology, people can get more and more information and have more and more ways to get information. But can we think it is a good thing? No, I don't think so. Although we can get more and more information, we should know "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention". For example, we were so sad for the air crash and hoped that the government could find out the reasons and get result to help their relatives and friends. But a moment later, a great thing came into our sight, and our attention was turned. So to some extend, I don't think it's a good thing that we get more and more information. We can get all kinds of information including irrelevant information, too. What should we do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information? I think we shouldn't believe some information that doesn't being confirmed. And we should be aware of information. Don't convey wrong information.

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